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Luke
Artist | Student | Traditional Art
United States
Some guy who draws sometimes.
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Just a quick notice that my tumblr blog is where most of my art goes nowadays. I still post my more finished work here but a much larger volume of my doodles and sketches will show up there.
Anyway here's that if you want to check it out. brandoman93.tumblr.com/search/…
Otherwise, hope everybody is doing great and I'm still around so that's nice.

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Hatsune Miku [+Speedpaint] by Exie-Kun
She looks really cute and the pose is really nice in this image. The background is too similar a color to her to really allow her to pop and so she sort of recedes into the rest of the image. I definitely suggest using a complimentary color to contrast her from it and really show the hard work you've done.

The coloring of her eyes is absolutely beautiful and they look fantastic. However I feel many of the other details are soft and blend too much, making her look a bit muddy in some areas, like the tops of her leggings and the transition to her thighs. With the use of a harder brush and lower opacity settings, you can have a painterly affect as well as pushing hard details while allowing gradual blending where it's intended to be.

The anatomy is decent, though some areas are a bit confusing, possibly due to the soft painting. The feet look a tad elongated from heel to toe and therefore disproportionate to the rest of the body. Her right shoulder is extended out too far and should be rotated inwards towards the neck a bit more, which would also allow for a more dynamic positioning of the arm.

Overall it's very pretty. Just figured I'd drop a bit of critique for you because I love seeing your stuff and I'd also love to see your improve further. c:

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ceruleandreams7 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, man. For the fav :)
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GaBoOwnz Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
No worries, your stuff is great. C:
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Yawl Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Luuuuuukeeeeeee
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GaBoOwnz Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Tetsuuuuuuuuuu
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Yawl Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Where have you been?
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GaBoOwnz Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Mostly tumblr tbh. Just haven't had a lot to post and most of my doodles end up there haha.
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SoraIcefreeze Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
:3 Thank you for the dev watch! 
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X-White-Wolf-X Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
guess who
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GaBoOwnz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
IS THIS ACTUALLYISFEFERI MAYBE
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X-White-Wolf-X Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OF COURSE
WHO ELSE HAS A FEFERI ICON AND A SIGNATURE THAT SAYS "FEFERI IS MY BBY/BABBU"
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